grace
February 20, 2010 at 8:38 pm | Posted in poetry, writing | 21 CommentsTags: glyph, jewellery poem
in your
tears descent
tiny stars sparkle
grace notes
between
the event and its
consequence
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magical writing,
love this poem so much!
😉
Comment by Jingle— February 21, 2010 #
This one sparkles in a galaxy all its own.
Comment by Val— February 21, 2010 #
hmmmm…I’m all too curious by far- what was the event, and what was the consequence…
Comment by screamish— February 21, 2010 #
Shimmering and beautiful Paul…
Comment by gnunn— February 21, 2010 #
Just lovely.
Comment by cocoyea— February 22, 2010 #
beautiful grace notes
Comment by alethakuschan— February 22, 2010 #
wow paul, noah likes muchly
Comment by sidewalkpainter— February 22, 2010 #
Beautiful!
Comment by Gabrielle Bryden— February 22, 2010 #
reflected facet off a crystal of surreal glistening
Comment by tipota— February 23, 2010 #
ohhh my .. i presume it’s ok to just swoon right here and now? beauty in the minor chord. yes, here it is.
Comment by Shell— February 23, 2010 #
love the use of ‘grace notes’ Paul, really striking, adds so much power
Comment by ashleycapes— February 23, 2010 #
Resplendent. Love it.
Comment by Selma— February 23, 2010 #
My goodness, talk about you and I being on a similar wavelength (the grace note thing).
A gorgeous poem — stunning, and music in and of itself.
Comment by Thomma Lyn— February 23, 2010 #
every. word. belongs.
beautifully.
Comment by tradersolstice— February 23, 2010 #
this is my favourite, this is an equisite piece, sad/joyful. intruiging. masterful work
Comment by gypsy— February 23, 2010 #
very graceful and subtle
Comment by Paul M. Peterson— February 23, 2010 #
Elegantly terse, like a haiku.
Comment by The Querulous Squirrel— February 24, 2010 #
Jewelry poem = brilliant!
Comment by Bryan Borland— February 24, 2010 #
It is the cadence, and the subtle rhymes, that make this a small gem. Hope you are well, dear friend.
Comment by harmonie22— February 24, 2010 #
such a delicate twinkling of gorgeousity, brilliant!
Comment by Red— February 28, 2010 #
exquisite!
Comment by hayat— March 5, 2010 #