grace

February 20, 2010 at 8:38 pm | Posted in poetry, writing | 21 Comments
Tags: ,

in your
tears descent
tiny stars sparkle
grace notes
between
the event and its
consequence

Advertisements

21 Comments »

RSS feed for comments on this post. TrackBack URI

  1. magical writing,
    love this poem so much!
    😉

    Comment by Jingle— February 21, 2010 #

  2. This one sparkles in a galaxy all its own.

    Comment by Val— February 21, 2010 #

  3. hmmmm…I’m all too curious by far- what was the event, and what was the consequence…

    Comment by screamish— February 21, 2010 #

  4. Shimmering and beautiful Paul…

    Comment by gnunn— February 21, 2010 #

  5. Just lovely.

    Comment by cocoyea— February 22, 2010 #

  6. beautiful grace notes

    Comment by alethakuschan— February 22, 2010 #

  7. wow paul, noah likes muchly

    Comment by sidewalkpainter— February 22, 2010 #

  8. Beautiful!

    Comment by Gabrielle Bryden— February 22, 2010 #

  9. reflected facet off a crystal of surreal glistening

    Comment by tipota— February 23, 2010 #

  10. ohhh my .. i presume it’s ok to just swoon right here and now? beauty in the minor chord. yes, here it is.

    Comment by Shell— February 23, 2010 #

  11. love the use of ‘grace notes’ Paul, really striking, adds so much power

    Comment by ashleycapes— February 23, 2010 #

  12. Resplendent. Love it.

    Comment by Selma— February 23, 2010 #

  13. My goodness, talk about you and I being on a similar wavelength (the grace note thing).

    A gorgeous poem — stunning, and music in and of itself.

    Comment by Thomma Lyn— February 23, 2010 #

  14. every. word. belongs.

    beautifully.

    Comment by tradersolstice— February 23, 2010 #

  15. this is my favourite, this is an equisite piece, sad/joyful. intruiging. masterful work

    Comment by gypsy— February 23, 2010 #

  16. very graceful and subtle

    Comment by Paul M. Peterson— February 23, 2010 #

  17. Elegantly terse, like a haiku.

    Comment by The Querulous Squirrel— February 24, 2010 #

  18. Jewelry poem = brilliant!

    Comment by Bryan Borland— February 24, 2010 #

  19. It is the cadence, and the subtle rhymes, that make this a small gem. Hope you are well, dear friend.

    Comment by harmonie22— February 24, 2010 #

  20. such a delicate twinkling of gorgeousity, brilliant!

    Comment by Red— February 28, 2010 #

  21. exquisite!

    Comment by hayat— March 5, 2010 #


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

Gravatar
WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change )

Cancel

Connecting to %s

Create a free website or blog at WordPress.com.
Entries and comments feeds.

%d bloggers like this: