these dreams of (ku)

February 11, 2009 at 6:32 pm | Posted in poetry, writing | 16 Comments
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one day and the next
two be spent in bed with you
crafting anti-hai

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  1. Simplicity is the glitter of art if not the essence…

    (Keep lucid dreaming Paul)

  2. There are a few possible combinations in here. Presents to me a bit like a riddle. 3 days, 1 couple? 2 days, 3 lovers and 2 of them spent? Great work, Paul.

  3. I like this – clever possibilities.

  4. Brilliant little well-crafted gem 🙂

  5. oo.. lucky lucky you 🙂

  6. Ah very lovely.

  7. Ha!!!

  8. I always prefer nuggets like this.
    And this one is ‘smoking’.

  9. oh; brilliant!

  10. Ah, this is indeed a sparkling gem!

  11. Exquisite.

  12. also in structure it looks like a picture of a japanese platform couch, very nice

  13. Thanks everybody. I think the look of them, like Chinese characters or tiny paintings will become more and more important, Tipota. I am going to call them ‘glyphs’. Each one should have a distinctive and unique taste or sensation, and a structural trick like a knot to tie them tight. Perhaps they are pendants or amulets.

  14. the touch of few words… i liked tipota’s comment, then yrs… interesting perspective …everything has power in it’s own way, the look, the reaction, the weight… the possibility less is more… is van morrison involved in that title…

  15. Paul, I am loving these creative explosions – tiny at first glance but when you spend some time pondering them, you realize how big they really are!

  16. yes i see the characters, the poems are like little houses, sheltering


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