these dreams of (ku)

February 11, 2009 at 6:32 pm | Posted in poetry, writing | 16 Comments
Tags: glyph, poetry

one day and the next
two be spent in bed with you
crafting anti-hai

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Simplicity is the glitter of art if not the essence…

(Keep lucid dreaming Paul)

Comment by hayat— February 11, 2009 #
There are a few possible combinations in here. Presents to me a bit like a riddle. 3 days, 1 couple? 2 days, 3 lovers and 2 of them spent? Great work, Paul.

Comment by Brad— February 11, 2009 #
I like this – clever possibilities.

Comment by Rachel Green— February 11, 2009 #
Brilliant little well-crafted gem 🙂

Comment by harmonie22— February 11, 2009 #
oo.. lucky lucky you 🙂

Comment by Mental Mist— February 12, 2009 #
Ah very lovely.

Comment by cocoyea— February 12, 2009 #
Ha!!!

Comment by vesper de vil— February 12, 2009 #
I always prefer nuggets like this.
And this one is ‘smoking’.

Comment by Wayne— February 12, 2009 #
oh; brilliant!

Comment by Sumedh Prasad— February 12, 2009 #
Ah, this is indeed a sparkling gem!

Comment by Elizavetta— February 12, 2009 #
Exquisite.

Comment by Narnie— February 12, 2009 #
also in structure it looks like a picture of a japanese platform couch, very nice

Comment by tipota— February 12, 2009 #
Thanks everybody. I think the look of them, like Chinese characters or tiny paintings will become more and more important, Tipota. I am going to call them ‘glyphs’. Each one should have a distinctive and unique taste or sensation, and a structural trick like a knot to tie them tight. Perhaps they are pendants or amulets.

Comment by Paul— February 12, 2009 #
the touch of few words… i liked tipota’s comment, then yrs… interesting perspective …everything has power in it’s own way, the look, the reaction, the weight… the possibility less is more… is van morrison involved in that title…

Comment by pieceofpie— February 14, 2009 #
Paul, I am loving these creative explosions – tiny at first glance but when you spend some time pondering them, you realize how big they really are!

Comment by poeticgrin— February 14, 2009 #
yes i see the characters, the poems are like little houses, sheltering

Comment by art predator— February 15, 2009 #