overcoming performance anxiety (3)

April 19, 2008 at 6:17 pm | Posted in poetry, writing | 8 Comments
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harpos a’bound,
seal nods them a ball, mountebanks hands one two three
thoughtbubble pops,
nipple,
whoops, there is such a thing
as a wicked grin, an errant hand,
outside on the lawn the adults
are playing croquet,

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  1. oh yes, wicked grins, this is so very you, you. (ps love that second smile of a line).

    Comment by johemmant— April 19, 2008 #

  2. i like this one, her thought bubble sez and i have never minded when the adults went off to do adult things that really are so very very boring.

    Comment by Lakota— April 19, 2008 #

  3. sounds just like paul squires–honk, honk

    Comment by Scot— April 19, 2008 #

  4. Glad things have calmed down here…your blog is back to being part of my morning ritual.

    Good stuff, Paul.

    Comment by Tina Trivett— April 20, 2008 #

  5. Damn it, Tina, stay out of my mind!

    Comment by Bob— April 20, 2008 #

  6. Damn it, Tina, stay out of my mind!

    Comment by Bob— April 20, 2008 #

  7. Holey mackeral, double barrelled Bob echoes, glad to hear things have settled down for both of you, i have been shaking things up instead,

    Comment by Paul— April 20, 2008 #

  8. thought bubbles are always great.

    Comment by kassandra— April 21, 2008 #


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