anti-haiku (#72)

October 28, 2007 at 9:58 am | Posted in antihaiku, writing | 4 Comments
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little boy in the corner
got a peg and a hole
hmmm,

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  1. oh I don’t understand Haiku… but I understand this. Does he have a hammer to drive it home?

    Comment by narnie— October 28, 2007 #

  2. the hmmm is my favourite
    the song of the peg, the resonance of the hole, or maybe he’s just humming, just thinking
    what shape is the peg, what shape is the hole and what colour is the whole

    Comment by beeskiffle— October 29, 2007 #

  3. And did what
    just came naturally!

    *grins and winks*

    Comment by You know who this is— October 29, 2007 #

  4. It must work – you must be doing something right – I just found you using a stumble – and of course I am faaaaaaaalling…Thanks alot

    Comment by 1poet4man— October 29, 2007 #


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