Compulsory Hip-Hop

October 22, 2007 at 5:09 pm | Posted in writing | 5 Comments
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Under no circumstances are we to
replicate a 4-4 beat at any time
and god forbid rhyme that line
with this or with
the fifth.

pulsary hip
com hop

(what a world it would be if young men
did not dance

com pulse
ary hip-hop
round campfires while young girls giggle
behind their hands and exchange grins.

(remember that? was it so long ago
you’ve forgotten campfires and bass drums
shifting flames
whilst parents conspired perfect matches knowing
that time was short til some shy draggeldy young thing
would distract with a sudden flick of the hip
and disappear into the darkness with a skip
and a quick smile, followed or following,

what a world it would be


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  1. Oh my goodness… what a big smile this is. Love it.

  2. amazing!

  3. Lovely, lovely.

  4. this is so playful… it dances.

    I never really made that connection… the ancient dances of courting with today’s hip-hop. Tickles my mind.

  5. you’ve made hiphop sound so nice! no AK-47s or whatever in sight hehe. great.
    oh yeah, there is bit that too, hahahaa, belly laugh,

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