Camera 3. (falling feather)

October 4, 2007 at 6:01 pm | Posted in writing | 3 Comments
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like a misplaced feather,
beauty, useless, drifts
down

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  1. Excellent! I like how you’ve used the different meanings in the down here .

  2. beautiful!

  3. Hinge – pivot at the end. (The pivot is the word which is doing more than one job, has multiple meanings. It allows the poem to open.)


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