Camera 2. (street scene)

October 4, 2007 at 7:30 am | Posted in writing | 4 Comments
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Like a skinny girl in low slung jeans and a tshirt walking an uneven pavement in bare feet, eyes to the ground contemplating hollowness,

past an old greybeard deadbeat in a bus stop who cares less of you than you of him,

like this, in shades of cloud grey and soft focus,

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  1. like this a busyrush and no see but eyes are so wide open from not looking, that the poet sees all. This is like forgetting, all over again, letting existance just happen, observing everything. beauty is in nothing

  2. Two part hinge in the middle – hollowness / dead beat

  3. beautiful, paul. your words became the picture.

  4. like these re-posts. i can see the paul in progress.


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