The Dali Heart (2)

September 24, 2007 at 7:48 am | Posted in writing | 2 Comments
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I wish I could craft vast cathedral doors
crowned by a Dali heart,
and as they open outward
a scented sigh is heard,

hand in hand,we could wander through,

into that landscape of the mind,

just me, my love, and you,

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  1. I think you crafted them perfectly.

  2. Each comma, like an arrow, aims for the apple on your reader’s heads.

    Bullseye, and we live another day.


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