Comments on: Please excuse Ernest Hemingway.

By: Selma

Selma — Tue, 07 Apr 2009 08:50:46 +0000

Sorry I haven’t commented for a while. I am hopelessly behind in my reading and I do believe your writing is of such a high standard that it deserves a well-considered response.
Sheer brilliance. How do you do it each and every time?

By: Thomma Lyn

Thomma Lyn — Mon, 06 Apr 2009 18:07:02 +0000

The “my dear” punctuating the landing in the forest is so perfectly placed that it gave me shivers.

By: harmonie22

harmonie22 — Mon, 06 Apr 2009 01:12:28 +0000

Paul, this is ‘so you’ and yet so different. I really like it, and admire your ability to meander so versatile-like with your voice and form. It’s just the way you slip in deep moments like “Caution, live thought” and “complete unreliability of memory” that I truly dig.

And the new header picture- I’m all ‘oohs and ahhs.’

Cheers

By: Narnie

Narnie — Sun, 05 Apr 2009 20:47:27 +0000

Oh the left hand, hmmmmm. I don’t miss Alessander or Bauer. This is fresh in it’s reminiscence and they would only blither with blusterings. More Sunonhead, yay!

By: Chico Mahalo

Chico Mahalo — Sun, 05 Apr 2009 13:46:48 +0000

perhaps that’s what you get when you combine writing with prolonged standing…

in any event, fresh as a fair wind…

By: Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Sun, 05 Apr 2009 12:12:05 +0000

Hmm, not sure i can excuse Hemingway, but i enjoyed reading this, especially the crickets and the monks