Comments on: Halo

By: hayat

hayat — Wed, 14 Jan 2009 12:14:23 +0000

I like this very very much Paul!

By: Fabian G. Franklin

Fabian G. Franklin — Wed, 14 Jan 2009 03:08:17 +0000

I like the second a little better.

By: Fabian G. Franklin

Fabian G. Franklin — Wed, 14 Jan 2009 03:06:21 +0000

I shall not speak of gravity
But wrap my thoughts in levity
I fear this seed shall bear no fruit
Except to leave the poet mute
Sir Isaac Newton would be displeased
Scratching his head neath the apple tree
To see one make light of his theory
So light it floats upon the breeze
How shall we mark the final sum
Here lies the fellow stricken dumb
Whose quiet repose rests in aplomb
He took his prose right to his tomb

lol

By: Fabian G. Franklin

Fabian G. Franklin — Wed, 14 Jan 2009 02:59:03 +0000

I shall not speak of gravity
But wrap my thoughts in levity
For what goes up surely must come down
To rest upon the sordid ground
Sir Isaac Newton would be displeased
Rubbing his head ‘neath the apple tree
To see one make light of his theory
So light it sails upon the breeze
I fear this seed shall bear no fruit
Except to leave the poet mute
And what will be left to mark his sum?
Here lies the man who sought more room
But nerves of articulation numb
Did strike the fellow deaf and dumb
Now his repose rests in aplomb
Who carried prose right to the tomb

Another day, another poem, another time.

By: Narnie

Narnie — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 22:57:11 +0000

The formatting is delicate and perfect for the context of the poem. Flickers of magic make this jewellery sparkle… totally.

By: PoeticGrin

PoeticGrin — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 19:20:21 +0000

I want to eat the word “chaosrainbows” – take it into my system and see how it transforms me. I love it.