Comments on: antihaiku #4

By: Jesús Ge

Jesús Ge — Sat, 05 Dec 2009 21:23:59 +0000

Hi, Paul.

I’m Jesús Ge, a spanish poet. I was working about the concept of Antihaiku in another way two years ago. My Antihaiku conserve the traditional metric form, and no metaphors condition, but it looks in death, unjustice, or pain situations of our actual world.

I published an Antihaikus leaflet into a collection of Contemporary Poems. You can download it here (http://www.fundacioninquietudes.org/area-publicaciones/pliegos-poesia_04.php) Sorry, it’s in Spanish.

Sorry for my english.

kind regards.

By: Mental Mist

Mental Mist — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 11:34:13 +0000

Nicely done!

By: Penultimate « Maekitso’s Café

Penultimate « Maekitso’s Café — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 09:31:52 +0000

[...] to whether I have done justice to the form. For an example of Paul’s antihaiku, have a look here and scroll down through the comments for a description of the [...]

By: thatplaidhipster

thatplaidhipster — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 00:36:37 +0000

I like what transpires in your head. It certainly lends one to think and to use their imagination.

Something sorely missing now days.
Something sorely missing like ((((((((((Amber!!!))))))))))), hellooooo,

By: ozymandiaz

ozymandiaz — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 11:41:29 +0000

but those gains are political and spent on the now in deferance to the long term
That is thought provoking comment and I think you could be right. Storage of the surplus might be come an issue, thanks Ozy,

By: randall

randall — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 07:16:10 +0000

I lack of anything intelligent to say- so allow me to simply say- you are the best.
Woohoo, I got a Randall comment, thankyou,