Comments on: A Shadow in Winter.

By: Tina Trivett

Tina Trivett — Sun, 22 Jun 2008 15:49:06 +0000

This is truly a jewel in your poetry crown Paul. Wear it proudly.
Thanks, Tina.

By: Paul

Paul — Fri, 20 Jun 2008 23:29:03 +0000

Thanks everybody, these are all wonderful comments. Such thoughtful and informed feedback is invaluable, precious.

By: Peter

Peter — Fri, 20 Jun 2008 23:19:38 +0000

I am numbering this among your masterpieces.

All of your work is poetic, of course, and pretty much all good, but I must admit I think your verse is the best.

“We could continue in this fashion / as though some archetype sought expression / but you are crying.” — Very moving. Thanks for the read!
Thanks for the feedback, Peter. Does that make four, I think, or five. I am keeping track of the ones you mark. I have to respect the opinion of a writer of such amazing prose.

By: pieceofpie

pieceofpie — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 18:08:12 +0000

yeah, what the hare and maria sed… sad, loss, vultures.. but you did say the shadow in winter… still crying… tho not the piano… to me crying is another form of being reborn within oneself… bits are dying floating away as others are being reborn… to others who observe maybe not so… sooner or later the candle burns the light is extinguished… the night calls you out… it is a most delightful poem with wings that stretch beyond today… thanks for visiting back a few and expanding our horizons…

By: nectarfizz

nectarfizz — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 17:03:31 +0000

I want to be the Walrus, but I fear I am instead the shameful oyster.

By: Queen of the Universe

Queen of the Universe — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 03:55:15 +0000

so achingly beautiful, thank you so much for sharing this…