Comments on: night sky prayer

By: Contentment « gingatao

Contentment « gingatao — Fri, 09 Jul 2010 20:34:48 +0000

[...] In the absence of memory, of stability in time the coarse mechanics of grammar collapse into a scrapyard of conjunctions and gears, verbs asking where Machiavelli went with his velvet inducements to intent. There sunonhead dreams of Venetian palace intrigues to be conducted like impossible waltzes. [...]

By: jason

jason — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 22:06:14 +0000

i just read this out loud to my wife. i bet yr words have inspired more than one bout of personal private luverliness. does that make you the cocteau twins of poetrix? thanks for the repost.

By: cocoyea

cocoyea — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 17:34:06 +0000

This is so beautiful

By: Sack Posset

Sack Posset — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 16:04:12 +0000

I’ve been away for a while and it’s so nice to come back and read your stuff. You make me really excited about writing.

By: Narnie

Narnie — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 07:43:46 +0000

Undulations. That was the word I forgot first time around. Beautiful undulations. You are a master of sound and movement.

By: Gabrielle Bryden

Gabrielle Bryden — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 06:28:29 +0000

Wow – this is superb – I’ll have to pin this one up as well, so I can read it over and again. Night sky, space, time – certainly have a great power over humans – as it should be – we need to be put in our place.