Comments on: Having lost everything, again.

By: new arrivals, new arrangements « the storybook collaborative

new arrivals, new arrangements « the storybook collaborative — Thu, 19 Jun 2008 06:09:19 +0000

[...] and from the good ship gingatao, the master mariner’s salty wordfeast, Having lost everything, again. [...]

By: mrs. sarah OTT.

mrs. sarah OTT. — Mon, 16 Jun 2008 05:00:57 +0000

the title is what really caught me since this is a tragedy i’ve found myself in more than a couple times. after reading the item and then looking at the art, i love what your mind got caught up in as you drifted into that painting. its a beautiful painting and a beautiful piece of writing. i love the leap of the heart sensation, considering the characters desperation.

By: pieceofpie

pieceofpie — Thu, 12 Jun 2008 23:54:33 +0000

dang, could not help it read all the comments so don’t have none of my own.. yeah, what they all sed!!.. you owe whacha owe… unhuh… the feet thing is such a thing.. there i sed it… punctuation w/o commas…

By: Paul

Paul — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 06:39:30 +0000

Kind of toying with the idea of the writer being forced into compromise (porno) in order to secure an audience and meet the practical necessities of life.

By: damyantig

damyantig — Tue, 10 Jun 2008 01:15:14 +0000

Lovely lines. I like how the same picture brought out different stuff from different people.

By: Paul

Paul — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 07:11:46 +0000

Haha, I know. I thought I had better dress for the occassion but it is uncomfortable. Did you notice I only used ‘these ones’ not “these”, so it was a compromise not a sellout, haahaha, hello, Ms P.,