Comments on: Quod Erat Demonstrandum

By: Narnie

Narnie — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 10:50:29 +0000

I think that it is true (or as close to true? how close is that? haha) is the reason it is so nice, perhaps.

By: Paul Squires

Paul Squires — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 10:24:53 +0000

I waffled on about every poem being a fiction and in a sense that is true, they are all fictions to the reader. But this poem is as close as I can get to a true story. I know a lot of people will find it horribly sentimental, but it is written to demonstrate a thought and the creature into which he is disappearing is not just an actual human but also a stream, a planet and the language somehow. Those four things have become so entangled in my work…anyway I know some people are going to really not like this poem. But I know there is one person who likes it a lot. The weight of opinion is irrelevant and every one is equal.

By: señorita

señorita — Fri, 22 May 2009 19:56:48 +0000

I must say this is wonderful. The weather here is gorgeous… and there? I must read this again and again. My favourite by far (so far)

By: Mary P

Mary P — Wed, 06 Aug 2008 10:27:11 +0000

If I had to choose a top ten … oh, this would be in the top three. The top three would be topsy-turvey each day to the next as I could open the cupboard door and take a different one down to choose my mood for the humdrum ahead – but this is perhaps the lightest, innermost wonderment that I have ever seen you write, You know.

By: gingatao!

gingatao! — Sun, 20 Jan 2008 00:06:57 +0000

Hopefully the Morrison-Huxley Effect will be working. I shall destabilize the Takeshi Kitano Nexus in preparation. Bon Voyage,

By: petersonion

petersonion — Sat, 19 Jan 2008 22:27:11 +0000

Just wanted to drop a little note to let you know I am starting here (this is the very first post, correct?) and plan on reading every word up to the present.

With a little gin and pineapple juice in hand, of course.

Cheers!